Lanturnes

Next in my Poetry Challenge. Lanturnes are 5-lined poems designed to look like a Japanese lanturn, with a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 1.

You
Tremble,
Squirming in
Your desire and
Fear

So
Helpless,
Completely
At my mercy,
Bound

And
Who will
Save you from
The sting of my
Whip?

4 thoughts on “Lanturnes

  1. writingthebody says:

    I do not think I would wish to be saved. That is minimal, sexy, beautiful. It is really a lovely little thing….and a few of us are squirming just now….well, I am!

    • Domina Jen says:

      Aww, thank you! I love that little mind-fuck that goes through a sub’s head when he’s torn between wanting the pain to continue and wanting it to stop. The struggle is evident on his face and I love it! Glad I could make you squirm 😉

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